Various and sundry things.
It establishes things. More actual action will come.
And of course by action you mean word bubbles coming out of the TV.
Leopold is a very convicting name.
I am chuckling at your sense of humor. Huge thumbs up for that. I'll be honest. I started reading but I was soon confussed. My long term memory is not something I am proud of, so I soon forget what was the last thing I read. Mostly if there is no image support. The picture is always the same here so no visual - information support to guarantee retention. I would suggest you seriously consider varying your picture frames a bit to avoid the inevitable monotony. Think about it. It is like writing a whole story with just dialogue. No tone change, no emotion, nothing but information. And fragmented, to make it more complicated.
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