Monday, May 19, 2014

Shooks Run (Week 3)

I love that everyone's stopped reading!

7 comments:

Pat Dilloway said...

So...that happened.

Tony Laplume said...

It establishes things. More actual action will come.

Pat Dilloway said...

And of course by action you mean word bubbles coming out of the TV.

Tony Laplume said...

Indeed.

DAVID WALSTON said...

Leopold is a very convicting name.

Al Diaz said...

I am chuckling at your sense of humor. Huge thumbs up for that. I'll be honest. I started reading but I was soon confussed. My long term memory is not something I am proud of, so I soon forget what was the last thing I read. Mostly if there is no image support. The picture is always the same here so no visual - information support to guarantee retention. I would suggest you seriously consider varying your picture frames a bit to avoid the inevitable monotony. Think about it. It is like writing a whole story with just dialogue. No tone change, no emotion, nothing but information. And fragmented, to make it more complicated.

Gina Gao said...

This was a really great post!

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